Final (Post audience feedback) magazine pages

I have completed all of my pages for my magazine, below is the results of what I have created. To complete these pages I need to receive audience feedback to make sure I have followed key conventions, have attracted the audience appropriately and is clear to read for the readers. I have made slight adjustments from previous posts to follow conventions of the actual page such as made sure that all of the columns are equal and the font is the same size.
I also made improvements to my front cover as I thought that it did not look as busy as I want it to so I have included more coverlines and have made my thumbnail images larger which is easier for the audience to see them.