Audience feedback

After creating my draft content pages, I went to some of my key demographic and asked them which features they liked the most and then which contents page in general they liked the most. I have put each feature of each page people liked the most in a red box. Overall I found out that people liked the bottom left contents page the most as nothing looked out of place, they liked the photos and how none of them looked out of place. However I was told that in this draft the masthead is not the clearest to read and there should be some soft of distinctive way to show that each of those photos are taken separately. For example I could put a boarder around the edge so that it is clearer that each of the photos are different.